
There are two parts in my life, one is the sun and the other is the moon
Let’s say they are two most important things, and yet they always bloom
When the sun the starts the day, the dawn marks its way
And when the moon starts the night, the dusk prays its mask
The sun may beam its ray and darken the sights
The moon may soothe the dismay and enlighten the lady at bays
At sea, there will be low and tides
There will be nights and days
The heralds could come so pompously
At tides, to announce these parts of my life
They jump to fire and ice, to water and soil
Suddenly, a girl saved my face; it’s a strong passion to be a part of the mirage
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Much appreciated!
Nice poem! ๐
Thanks for sharing, Mas!!
Warm regards,
Subhan Zein
Thanks Mas Subhan for the comment. Have a good weekend ๐
Have a good weekened to you too! ๐
Thank you Mas. I won’t be surprised if you would have different interpretations on the poem above as I like it to be perceived in multiple ways. Thanks Mas for visiting. Slm semangat! ^^
haha, some say the more layer you have when interpreting it, the higher value of literary art you have with your poem.. ๐
It’s true indeed. Thanks for that. I’d expect to have the same in yours ^^
hahaha, I don’t think you’d find it mine, simply because I don’t have as much strong artistic pedigree as you do! ๐
Hahaha, you kid me, Mas… In fact, I learn a lot from you (r) (writings and thoughts) Cheers ๐